Hey guys! Yes, I’m still here- I haven’t abandoned my blog if that’s what you were thinking. Then why has it been almost a month since I wrote, you ask? I’d love to say I was chilling off to let my brain relax and reboot so that it could come up with more awesome ideas to write about. That I’d taken a ‘Writing Vacation’, if you will, to help my writing. Truth is, writing wasn’t even on my mind. I last blogged on November 7 (TTW part 11) and let me tell you what happened after that. I’d love to tell the whole story in detail, but then you’ll probably get bored. So here’s a short version- from 8-12 November I was at my naani’s (maternal grandma’s) place because my maama (maternal uncle) was getting married. For non-Indians, Indian weddings aren’t a simple one-day affair- no sir, you aren’t husband and wife until a lot of rituals have been completed. From 12-22 November, I was down with dengue. From 24 Nov- 1 Dec, I had my post-midterm exams. And today you have it- the day I blog on- Sunday.
There you go. Now let’s move on to the stuff you come here for- literary pieces. Here’s one-
God has two eyes, just like us
Which he uses to watch over the world
The only differences are- that they’re enormous
And differently coloured.
One is the sun, the other, the moon
Each keeping watch on its side of the world
As half of it’s dark and half of it’s bright
Moon goes blind in the day, the sun at night.
On winter mornings, when there’s a chill in the air
God takes longer to wake from his deep slumber
And thus opens his eyes late
Comfortable, as he was in his blanket of cosmic fabric.
Against the dreary playground of the sky,
The sun is a smooth orange ball
Neither resting nor moving- just always there
Like some child’s abandoned toy.
A deeper shade of vermillion
Colours the underneath of the sun
As if it had seen its beloved
And was trying not to blush, but did.
The Christmas ornament hangs in the sky
Suspended by invisible threads
Unmoving, even in the strongest winds,
Adorning the bleary, lifeless heavens.
But if you look at it and walk
It seems to follow like a dog
Because remember, it’s still the eye of God
Watching everything you do.
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Nice imagery and i’ll grant you the poetic ‘licence’, but the logician in me wants to point out that every 29 days or so God goes ‘cross-eyed’, as the darker one covers the Brighter one! (Or at least it appears to from down here on little old Earth. 😉 🌘 ☀️
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It’s all about perspective, innit?
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Understanding the perspective we view things from is definitely a critical factor! 😉
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I wish I could partake in one of those Indian weddings, because of all the people telling me about what a production it is. But then I realize, that I would probably be exhausted by day 2.
Your poem was absolutely fantastic. Loved it!
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Oh yes. You would be. Even Indians become exhausted but the happiness and the environment keeps on fuelling us. And then when it all ends, boy, we sleep like we’ve been awake all our life.
Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Yes, you need a vacation after it.
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You’re Indian ? Wowww I read charlie so wasnt expecting that.
Lovely post btw. Like your writing style
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Haanji, 100% made in India. The blog name is a spin on Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, my first favourite book.
Thank you for reading and leaving your kind words on my little space!
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Yup got the reference. I loved the book too 🙂
Lovely to see a fellow indian ji 😀
And you’re most welcome
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I was missing you! And term exams suck.
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Missed you too, T! Oh, term exams suck worse than a lemon.
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Nicely written. It’s nice to hear from you again. How did your writing competition go, if you don’t mind me asking? 🙂
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Thanks! Oh *waves hand* of course I don’t mind. But I do mind the fact that it was actually on 1st November, when I was on leave, while my teacher had told me that it was on 2nd. And I had to sit in class all day, looking like an idiot because of course I hadn’t brought any books. I was in a sour mood all day, spoke even less than I usually do, and I poured my heart out in two poems which I wrote in a fit of rage as soon as I learnt that I’d missed it. I’d really been looking forward to it, and had memorised all my poems just to be on the safer side, and all that went to hell. So much for a competition.
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Aww, that’s terrible. I don’t blame you for being upset. There’s always next time. 🙂
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What competition is this?
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I had an interschool poetry competition, where we had to write a poem on a topic given on the spot in 30 mins and recite it afterwards (what are we, five?). The rest is history (for me, at least).
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You have such a great way with words!
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Thanks, Goldy! (Can I call you that? Because of your username, you know. Or do you prefer to be called by a less childish name?)
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That sounds just fine!
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I liked it 😊 Very original 👍
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Thank you!
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