With half-closed eyes the sun
Watches the heavenly ink
Spill out of its pot
As if God, like a frustrated poet
Had pushed his inkpot off his writing-desk.
The golden light from Sol’s eyes
Bathes the horizon in a sandy glow
But it cannot continue further
For the Sun is drowsy,
And ’tis tarnished by the blue
From the irises of the sky-spirits.
The abaxial green, as if dissatisfied with its colour
Lets the blue take over
Which, corrupted by the inksplatter
Mirrors an elephant’s skin under water.
Then the blue-gray darkens
As if the elephant were surfacing
To take in a gulp of air.
Finally it all dissipates
Into the swirling, bubbling pot of tar
Inverted at the zenith of the sky
Defying his mother Terra’s pull
Growing, expanding slowly
Like a black hole
Swallowing all the light around
Burping stars occasionally.
Poetry is definitely your niche. I loved this! The first stanza is truly wonderful! xoxo
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Thank you so much, Krista! And welcome to the Factory!
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Beautifully written. Love the visual imagery you conjure up with your words π
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Thank you so much, Sulaiman! And welcome to the Factory!
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Thanks for reading bud!
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My pleasure!
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This was absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you!
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My favorite part were the first 3 lines. I liked how you described the colors of the sky.
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I’m so happy I could capture the dusk sky’s colours accurately π Thanks once again!
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Brilliant work.
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Thank you π
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Sure.
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